Research presentation feedback nice layout Overview make keywords bold Background separation doesn't make sense here stick to the background, nothing else (similar products, how are they used...) Aims measurable things, what are we going to give to our client mostly talking about the app's functions (gamification, costs and benefits...) what form of digital solution? what the object is? has meaning to the user ->describe it better Objectives not "extensive" research put them in the right order (research, design, prototype, testing, report) how are we going to test it? what research? who's our target audience? - the key to the solution avoid vague words (hopefully, probably...) -> we will be Gamification put more pictures (not clipart) Other Applications not an educational app - not what the user asked for has to have meaning to the user User Engagement - Other Methods quality of the data, where's it from - remember the source User Engagement - Other Me...